Stories in the Making
One of the things I enjoy is people watching. I’m pretty sure most writers agree that a story can be found whenever we sit and watch.
It takes a little practice and a cautious style. The moment people realize you are watching the magic is gone.
So there I was hanging out in the Vienna square. Our tour guide gave us a couple of hours to explore and we were taking every advantage we could.
It was nearing the noon hour on a busy summer day. The sky was blue, the wind was warm and people of all ages were passing by.
And there he was
He was a teenage boy. Maybe 16, maybe older. One thing was certain: He wasn’t a tourist.
He had the look of a local. He also had another look: He was on his phone with someone special.
The excitement in his eyes and the honesty in his smile caught my eye. I could hear his conversation but I couldn’t understand his words. But our language barrier didn’t matter. I recognized that tone. I too use to be a teenage boy.
The Suspense is Terrible. I Hope it Lasts.
To my luck he didn’t walk away when his conversation ended. I watched in anticipation as he took a deep breath and attempted to straighten his hair.
He wore a colorful button down shirt. I wanted to advise him to unbutton the top two. Three if he was daring. It was all I could do to sit still.
Without warning a familiar voice caught his attention. I followed his eyes to the end of the square. His hand quickly moved away from his hair. His shoulders stiffened, his fingers clenched.
And there she was
Something in his eyes told me it was too soon. He was supposed to have more time. He wasn’t ready.
His smile broadened, his dimples ran deep. I watched as they met halfway. She made the first move by placing her arms around his neck. His hands lay still. A moment of confusion, I guessed, but I knew in time he’d figure it out.
She kissed him on the cheek and spoke a few words. I had a feeling this was one of the greatest moments of his life.
I watched as they slowly disappeared into the crowd. Were they friends? Were they more? Or was this simply a great day?
I smiled and continued on my way. Not everything requires an answer, I said.
I have just realised something. Something really important.
Everything you write about, is, or could be a story. Instantly, we want to know more about the person and the situation.
I salute your talent, Bryan…
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You made my day. Thank you. That is my goal and if I achieved it in your eyes my work is complete.
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No ifs, Bryan…
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Ooo, you’re a good people watcher. You notice the relevant details!
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Hi Priscilla. Thanks. There are so many stories around us, isn’t there.
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There’s the benefit of people watching, right there, sharing that moment. Nicely done!
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Thank you, Dan.I was lucky that he stood still until she arrived.
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Well done making the boy jump out of the pages (screen). I was watching this unfold, too.
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You would have fun watching him. 🙂
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Your writing is so much fun to read. Thank you for this lovely story
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Hey kid! Fun talking to you again.
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You have a gift, my friend for bringing all characters to life, even those “real life” characters that to everyone else seem to blend into the background! 😉
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That is the best compliment. Thank you. I’ve have always said there are stories passing us by everyday. We just need to find them. If what I find entertains you that’s the best thing in the world.
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You turned people writing into a fun read. This made me smile 🙂
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Hi, Mae. Thank you. That makes me feel good.
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It is great.
Best wishes
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I see you’re from London. I was in your beautiful city a few weeks ago. I have some stories to tell in the coming weeks.
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Oh, young love. Eve if they were just friends, she obviously means something more to him or else why was preening? 💜💜 You do watch the world with writer eyes.
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Hi Lorraine. The stories that pass us by are fascinating, aren’t they. So many little things that become tiny little stories all to themselves.
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Awesome. Great pace, great words. ❤
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Thank you, Claudette. I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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Made me a little teary (in a good way).
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My world traveling friend. I’m curious if you have ever been there?
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Unfortunately, no! But it has been on my bucket list since I was a child – longing to see Vienna’s famous Spanish Riding School where the Lipizzaner horses perform!!!
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Well, the suspense was killing me Bryan – you had me at “as he took a deep breath and attempted to straighten his hair.”
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It was the perfect play and it all happened right in front of me. Talk about first row seats. 🙂
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Oh how sweet! Makes me remember those teenage nerves and excitement 😃 Lovely story!
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It sure did. A half a world away and we’re all the same. Makes the heart feel good.
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