A long time ago I wrote a novel that I named Saving Iris. I had no clue what I was doing but I wrote it anyway. It was really bad. I’m pretty sure there was a plot and maybe a likable character or two but that wasn’t my only problem.
I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was missing.
I forgot about it for a long time until one day I shared it with a writer’s group. Thankfully the opening was strong enough to receive an invite. Sadly, as you now know, the rest of it not so much.
Practice, Practice
I saw it as practice. A lesson of things to come, so to say. This practice novel taught me work ethic, how to handle criticism and what to do when you can’t shake a certain feeling.
Saving Iris soon became lost in my hard drive. She would sit, patiently waiting as rubble upon rubble of other nonsense do’s and don’t piled over her.
One day I removed her from the pile of rubble and decided to give her another go. The result was a sharper version of the original. A better story, I thought, a tad clever, I guessed.
In other words, something the reader could really sink their teeth into.
Same as it ever was
But the feeling stayed. Something was missing. A piece of the puzzle that didn’t belong. Or worse, a piece that was lost.
What are you trying to tell me, Iris. I’d ask. I’m listening. I’ve got all day. Don’t be shy.
On the plane ride home from London something happened. For reasons I haven’t exactly figured out I had one of those ‘Of course’ moments.
Maybe I was zoning, or watching a movie or I was really excited because it’s snack time. Long plane rides really mess with your heads. Whatever it was that missing piece was placed where it belonged and I couldn’t get home quick enough to write it .
Iris and the missing piece
Funny how it works, isn’t it. An old practice novel lost and forgotten, now I’m 20,000 words in with my goal to finish draft one by the end of October.
I’m not sure I’ll make that goal but the confidence of writing a story a reader will like is there. It’s the same confidence I had when I wrote Dempsey’s Grill. And, just like Dempsey, Iris is starting to take over.
She’s literally taking the pen out of my hand.
Sometimes the stories we write have their own time table and it’s up to us to listen. With Saving Iris I’m glad I did. Now if you’ll excuse me, she’s telling me to get back to work.
I love it when characters do this… enjoy, and tell us when it’s finished?
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I sure will. Thank you.
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Can’t wait to read what you’ve done with it, Bryan 😊.
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You read my second attempt. At least you saw what I was trying to do. I sort of came close.
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I wonder if the little girl in the beautiful painting is Iris herself. The purple irises against her yellow dress, striking! Good luck with your October writing goal!
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That might be her. She does love attention. 🙂
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I feel excited for you! I bet this version will be a winner. Let us know when it’s finished. And good luck!
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Hi Joy. I sure will. Thank you for stopping by. I sure appreciate that.
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I’m glad to hear that you re-discovered Iris after all this time.
Best of luck on your writing.
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It’s the strangest thing about writing. You never know when these things will figure themselves out.
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I think the hardest thing about being a writer is trusting your instincts. There are so many opinions about how something has to be done and especially what should never be done when you’re writing a book. At some point it’s great when you know what to listen to and what to ignore outright. Happy writing!
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Well said. I could have stayed with the original idea. Happy I wrote a full length novel and moved on from there but that would have been a disservice to the story. I could not have forgiven myself.
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Is Dempsey’s Grill on Amazon? I need to get a copy, soon.
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It sure is. Here you go:
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Thank you. I have added it to my Amazon Wish List
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Thank you Bryan, this post is more than inspiring as I’m going through a stint of writers block. And I’m feeling how you felt about Iris, about my book. This brings me some hope. I’m glad you rediscovered Iris, and much luck on your goal of finishing by the end of Oct.
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Take a step back or do what I did and put it away for a little while. Your mind will always have a connection to the characters and the story line. Relax, carry on with your life and while you’re doing so don’t be surprised if the story or the characters figure it out. I wouldn’t be surprised if it does.
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Good luck with your writing 🙂
I wrote a first novel which I guess is a practice one. I’m now on the 2nd one which I’m hoping will get somewhere with!
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Your first one might be the one you’ll do over someday. Like Iris, sometimes they figure it out.
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There’s no better feeling that the surge of creativity and the passion of bringing those characters to life.
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Isn’t that the truth. I almost took over and the flew the plane myself. It was going way to slow. 🙂
Thank you, Lorraine.
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Ah, I love those a-ha moments! I’m so happy that you and Iris are putting it all together:-)
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A lot of us get them and when we do we thank whoever it was that passed them our way.
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So glad you didn’t give up on it. Sometimes we need a little distance, sometimes a lot, to gain perspective.
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We sure do. I think it’s important to step away.
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